INTRO
Title animation sequence
Slides of candid school scene photos with public licensing
from deviantart.com as well as Vassar College Archives.
Edited mix of Vera Lynn song “We’ll Meet Again.”
EXT. BENNET COLLEGE SITE - DAWN, FOG
Hand cam shot- Tyler talking about Bennett college and turns
the camera at Jake.
Tyler
"Ahhh. Bennett College. Doesn't look so
scary!" You scared Jake?"
Points camera towards Jake for ECU.
Jake
" No!"
Tyler
"You sure? You look scared!"
Text-
Bennett College
Millbrook
NY
10/28/2012
Fade- In
TYLER WALKS THROUGH THE GRASS TOWARDS THE ABANDONED
BUILDING, HIS CHEST STARTS TO POUND, HE CATCHES HIS BREATH. VISIBILITY IS A
PROBLEM AND THE FLASHLIGHT IN HIS left HAND BARELY GLOWS THROUGH THE DENSE FOG.
Tyler
“I have been past this place like 100 times.”
Jake
“Me too.”
Tyler
“I heard that kids always come up here to hang out. It’s
haunted and that like 100 girls were killed by the ghost of some crazy teacher!”
Jake
“Shut up man!”
Tyler
“HAHAHA I’m just messing with you Jake! Nobody ever comes up
here!”
Jake
“Wait….What?”
Tyler
“HAHAHAHA.
JAKE NOTICES A LOW GLOW COMING FROM THE PORCH. TYLER RUSHES
THROUGH, CALLING FOR JAKE WHO CAME WITH HIM TO INVESTIGATE THE OLD GIRLS
SCHOOL. SUDDENLY, TYLER HEARS A NOISE BEHIND HIM AND SEE’S JAKE WALKING ABOUT
75 YARDS BACK. WITH A TERRIFIED YET PUZZLED LOOK, TYLER STOPS IN HIS TRACKS AND
WAITS.
Tyler
“What are you stopping for?”
Jake points ahead at the glow, which has now intensified.
Jake
“Is that a girl?”
EXT. BUILDING THE BOYS WALK TOWARDS THE BUILDING
The girl is sitting on the second step of the building. Her
long dark hair is messed and she is staring down at her hands. A flickering
glow surrounds her as she appears to be whispering something. As the boys
approach, she becomes silent, scowling she looks up. The boys stop in their
tracks. Terrified, Jake drops his flashlight. The two boys turn and run towards
the darkness. Suddenly a bright light shines in their face, stopping them in
their tracks. The girl blocks the way, holding the flashlight.
Bree
“You dropped
something.”
The boys turn and begin to run when they hear a mans voice
over a walkie talkie.
OVERDUB POLICE CONVERSATION
“Yeah I saw a car parked over by the side entrance. I’m
going to go investigate.”
“10-4. Prolly just kids, but who knows with that place.”
“Roger that. I hate coming out here.”
THE GIRL RUSHES TOWARDS THE SCHOOL, CALLING THE BOYS TO
FOLLOW HER.
The girl goes through the door and down the hallway to the
back room as the boys follow. (youtube interior footage)
Jake
“Man you are so stupid! Now we are gonna get arrested!”
Tyler
“Jake shut up! Where is your sense of adventure! Laughs….
“This place is amazing!”
“I bet some girl was killed right here!”
EXT. BLODGETT HALL, DOORWAY EXIT
PUSH SHOT OF THE THREE LEAVING THE DOOR OF BLODGETT HALL.
THEY THEN RUN AWAY FROM BUILDING
EXT. CAR SHOT
OVERDUB POLICE RADIO
Unit 7 to HQ. Yeah It was just kids. I am watching them run
to a gold Jeep plate number edward
William edward 7085.
The three run towards jeep and enter. Tyler drives. Girl
front. Jake back pass.
INT. CAR SHOT BLUE SCREEN WINDOWS
Tyler drives away from school. Gps navigation shows route,
with intermitting loss and static.
Jake
“haha that was close!”
Tyler
“Let’s
just get the hell out of here!”
Driving -blue screen footage-
Jake
“What
are we going to do with her?”
Driving. Girl starts to laugh. act erratic. Yelling.
Tantrum.
Tyler
“What
the fuck? Shut up!
Girl acts more possessed, rocks back and forth.
Jake
“Tyler…. Kick her out”
Tyler
“Get
Out!!”
“Holy
Shit!” Slams brakes. Everyone lunges forward.
Jody - In road. Blue screen footage
Standing still. Then lunges with over head shot.
Ext. shot in road.
Car in ditch. Pass door open. Girl gone. Tyler and Jake passed out.
ENDING NARRATIVE AND SLIDES
(V.O)
Bennett College eventually closed it’s doors in the fall of
1976. The dean of the college, Dr. Jane Shore, claimed that due to financial
reasons the school couldn’t compete with other ivy league schools.
In June of 1977,
Bennett College was in the headlines again when NY state police filed charges
against former professor, Nancy Augusta. Citing that while teaching history at
the elaborate all girl school, Professor Augusta mentally and physically
tortured several students leading to the eventual deaths of 38 girls in the 15
years she was employed at the school.
In August of 1977,
the story took another turn as Professor Augusta committed suicide while in her
cell at the Millbrook NY police barracks. In the following years there have
been 9 unexplained and sudden deaths in the same cell that her body was found.
End Slide sequence with 3d animation.
ECU SHOT OF GIRL SCREAMING
Girl screams a few
times and then abruptly stops
Freeze Frame to Rolling End Credits
CLOSING CREDITS
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